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-This app, and many others like it, have been built in support of many of Netlandish's
-own sites, and sites of our clients. We would love to help you on your next project
-so get in touch by dropping us a note at hello@netlandish.com.
+This software, and lots of other software like it, has been built in support of many of
+Netlandish's own projects, and the projects of our clients. We would love to help you 
+on your next project so get in touch by dropping us a note at hello@netlandish.com.